This is the “final” draft of the Activities of the People paper that was previously posted on Jux. I turned it in to my professor on Wednesday.
The number of changes I’ve made is readily obvious. For one thing, the paper is almost three full pages shorter this time. The entire introduction and conclusion have been reworked. In the end, there is much less information, but the content is better organized and structured. The argument is stronger. So please, read away, but do remember the connection between plagiarism and broken legs.