Zero: Segment 3

Sometimes I wish I could switch into screenplay mode for dialog scenes.


This section of the story is a bit slower than the two that came before it. It takes place entirely in the hospital, and is mostly dialog. Segment 4 should make up for this a bit, and then Segment 5 is going to hit with more exposition. That’s the problem with this sort of story. Lots of information to convey before anything makes sense. I’m trying to make it as easy to digest as possible, although I’m tempted to just have someone stand up and go “Okay, so here’s what’s happening!” Also, to carry over the warning from Segment 2: Some people have been telling me that they get a password dialog when they try to download the text file. This doesn’t make any sense to me, since the directory is most certainly not password protected. However, if you’re one of these people, just click “cancel” and you should be able to access it fine.

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