Zero: Segment 6b

Please forget the original segment 6 was ever posted.


Okay, so the original segment 6 was horrible. I blame my friend Rebecca. It’s not at all her fault, but she was bugging me to work on Zero more, so I’ll blame her anyway. The real problem was that I felt the need to write more, but I really wasn’t in the mood to work on Zero. So I forced it. And it turned out horrible. Segment 6b will replace Segment 6 is the storyline. I’m going to leave the original Segment 6 online, so you all can see what happens when writers fuck up bad , but as far as I’m concerned…it is kaput. That being said, Segment 7 will seem familiar to those of you who did read it, as it’s going to be the same fight, only completely rewritten and better. I promise.

To carry over the warning from Segment 2: Some people have been telling me that they get a password dialog when they try to download the text file. This doesn’t make any sense to me, since the directory is most certainly not password protected. However, if you’re one of these people, just click “cancel” and you should be able to access it fine.

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